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Dear Mr. Davis,
I have been searching for the pool on the third floor for six years now. We need access to the pool.
The first reason we need access to the pool is to make it fair. Up until now, only seniors have had access, or have seen the pool area. That is less than one quarter of the school’s population who can use this area. If we allowed the entire student body access to this area, the entire school will be more happy.
Another reason we need access to the pool is that you can use it as an award or to reward student performance and behavior. According to the website, 2cool4school, 86% of students feel that their school is more likely to punish than award them in the next week (Phoney). Giving students a place where they are recognized and awarded for following the code of conduct and getting good grades is a great idea!
Please construct an escalator, elevator, or even stairs that would give us access to the third floor pool.

Thank you very much,

Ima Goodstudent




Phoney, Baloney. “Good students, great rewards.” 2cool4school. October 34/2007. October, 2007. http://yourspace.com/phoney/goodstoodentsgotocollage